its a coo beat thats all i have to say
HOT AS FUCK
J this is honestly my favorite beat that you have ever made, its a fucking masterpiece, weezy himself would feel blessed to rap on this beat.
Its awesome but weird, i rate it a 10
It's good, but it could be better
Great and could be better at the same time
Honestly the song is hot as fuck, but there are a couple things that we can do better, Verse 1 (Dyse), all he needs to do is swag it out, verse 2 (Aztec), you fucking killed it "CALL ME THE MOTHER FUCKING RHYME MASTER, OR YOSEMIDY SAM, CUZ I AM A GUNBLASTER" that shit is hot as fuck, Verse 3 (J Boi), its cool and laid back, but you should probly rap a little faster on this song, kinda like you do in I Do It Big, then it would really kill kill lol, Verse 4 (D Mike), OMFG this is a hot verse, "BEFORE YOUR MOTHER FUCKIN ASS TAKES A TURN THATS WRONG" all chopped and screwed = hot as fuck, one thing to change, D Mike you say "I'm Illegal like a desert eagle". you should say "I am lethal like a desert eagle" cuz i'm illegal doesnt make sense, cuz desert eagles aren't illegal, only if you are underage. so thats that, Verse 5 (Renegade), well it's hard to criticize myself but i'll try, all in all, this is possibly the worst verse i have ever written, it doesnt stay on topic and i was just nervous cuz there was a lot of shit going on in the room when i was writting and couldn't concentrate, but no excuses, it sucks plain and simple, it's fast but the lyrics suck, verse 6 (Mali Fresh) = Hot but i think you should have used the second half of that verse on that song rather than the first half, you should have started the verse where you say "So where's the punk ass n***a's who say they can't be shot" you know which one i'm talking about it, thats the only way you would have been able to kill it harder than what you already did.
Az and BHK!!!!!
this is a club song that bumps, good job j and aztec, glad to work with you guys, j you need to keep rapping faster than you usually do, like in this song, that kills it pretty hard, and aztec i like the verse but what makes it real hard is the fact that you have the reverb on your voice, it's hard to find a good way to use reverb, and you and j found the right place to do it, and the right person to use it on.
could be better
The song is good j, the hook is good, but it's not good enough man, honestly we can probly tweak it a bit to make it from good to great.
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